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Woman with curves - a Limerick, spontaneous collaboration with jagracia. That was fun!
There once was a woman with curves
who liked all the men who she served.
She went down on them all
queued up in the hall
getting all just what they deserved.
who liked all the men who she served.
She went down on them all
queued up in the hall
getting all just what they deserved.
Published 23rd Sep 2013
| Edited 27th Sep 2013
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23rd Sep 2013 7:01pm
And just because I asked if the word "curve" is appropriate, too,
for the bends roads make
since we originally and innocently
talked about motorbikes.
Thanks, d., we love your comment :-).
for the bends roads make
since we originally and innocently
talked about motorbikes.
Thanks, d., we love your comment :-).
23rd Sep 2013 7:18pm
Great limerick Ms. Chi, a little sexiness with alluding curves, I like it very much!
I'll pass your kind words on to my collab partner jagracia who did most of the work! Thank you from both of us!
23rd Sep 2013 8:19pm
and here I thought I would be gifted with a collab. :( oh well
I guess I can only wish lol... Nice collab. You two :)
I guess I can only wish lol... Nice collab. You two :)
Dear Poe, we surely could try! Although I can't say from your words if you'd rather collab. with either jagracia or with me :-). Thanks for your sweet words, we appreciate them much!
25th Sep 2013 9:04pm
Chi, it's a bawdy piece, what the limerick was designed for. but primarily I like to comment on your work for all the love you reward us with in your responses...
Nice words for a bawdy limerick, JF. I will remember them. Thank you for your honest comment!
Some days later ... Have to add: At first I didn't get what you meant. Now that I understand I'd like to thank you for your kindness!
Some days later ... Have to add: At first I didn't get what you meant. Now that I understand I'd like to thank you for your kindness!
Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 8:18pm
Personally I just came by for a better look at those smooth legs in a leather skirt Miss Chi..but was drawn in by the story behind that and find myself applauding your wit and looking for the pic of your motorbike..:) Nice norty limerick btw..:)
26th Sep 2013 8:31pm
Hi nopoetiknow! Thank you for stopping by and reading jagracia's and my naughty little ad hoc piece :-). And I'd like to thank you for your friendly and benevolent comment.
I could attach a pic of my bike to that poem ... Tell me, if you're interested, since J.'s and my motorbikes were the bone of contention.
I could attach a pic of my bike to that poem ... Tell me, if you're interested, since J.'s and my motorbikes were the bone of contention.
Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 9:02pm
Heck Yea! I'm quite the motorbike fan..love to see them both...I'll even show you mine..lol
26th Sep 2013 9:05pm
Anonymous
27th Sep 2013 7:31pm
Wow! Cool Bike Miss Chi..what manufacturer? is it a Brit bike or Japanese? it's really beautiful and black ...sweet! Thanks for sharing, wish we could take some curves together :)
Thanks a lot nopoetiknow. She's my Black Beauty :-). It's a BMW F 800 ST. And black, yes :-). That would be nice, taking some curves together. Or bends? Turns? Whatever ...
Anonymous
27th Sep 2013 10:34pm
twisties..haha
