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Insane Asylum
Concrete walls hold
the echoing footsteps
fear lives in every room
screaming inside the
minds of the so called insane
locked doors keep them
captive like in a cage
strapped to a cold metal
bed with noisy springs
empty eyes glare upwards
the drugs given to them
take over what little
sanity they had left inside
made crazy by association
not by a chemical imbalance
turned into zombies fried
by electric shock treatments
from Doctors thrill seeking
off the pain of others
nightmares and haunting pasts
the echoing footsteps
fear lives in every room
screaming inside the
minds of the so called insane
locked doors keep them
captive like in a cage
strapped to a cold metal
bed with noisy springs
empty eyes glare upwards
the drugs given to them
take over what little
sanity they had left inside
made crazy by association
not by a chemical imbalance
turned into zombies fried
by electric shock treatments
from Doctors thrill seeking
off the pain of others
nightmares and haunting pasts
Published 22nd Sep 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Sep 2013 9:49pm
Freaking sick write tl!
Makes you think about those places!
strider
Makes you think about those places!
strider
22nd Sep 2013 11:14pm
22nd Sep 2013 11:15pm
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2013 00:01am
What a horrific place to be. I like and agree with this passage:
"made crazy by association
not by a chemical imbalance"
Love can make one exhibit symptoms of madness ;)
"made crazy by association
not by a chemical imbalance"
Love can make one exhibit symptoms of madness ;)
23rd Sep 2013 00:59am
Oh hell, if that's not the truth osobeto...love and madness go together!Thank you :)
23rd Sep 2013 4:53am
A darker write from you TL.
It kind of reminds me of,
"The House on Haunted Hill,"
for some reason.
It's crazy, the experiments
that they did on those poor
people.
But they make great Haunting
Tales.
Enjoyed this... Pan
It kind of reminds me of,
"The House on Haunted Hill,"
for some reason.
It's crazy, the experiments
that they did on those poor
people.
But they make great Haunting
Tales.
Enjoyed this... Pan
23rd Sep 2013 6:15am
I've been "forced " by my children to watch horror movies..I made them a deal, no gore but scary is okay!
It is awful, some of the things that took place!
Thanks for reading and commenting Pan. :)
It is awful, some of the things that took place!
Thanks for reading and commenting Pan. :)
23rd Sep 2013 6:34am
I echo most of the comments. Pic is obviously of such a place about to be demolished (or converted to better use).
23rd Sep 2013 6:45am
23rd Sep 2013 3:42pm
such a horrific image. to bring such a place to life with words is frighteningly amazing.
23rd Sep 2013 4:12pm
27th Sep 2013 2:54am
Reminds me a lot like prison. Being gang banged by security and waking up with kidney stones. Scary stuff.
27th Sep 2013 3:03am
27th Sep 2013 3:14am
Never happened to me. Some guy tried to turn me over, but I grabbed both of his balls and ripped his scrotum in half. He balled like a little bitch.
3 years. ha
3 years. ha
29th Sep 2013 1:11pm
the first line opens a dark n gloomy picture in my mind... its just delightfully creepy ... keep it up
