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He "Was" my best friend
He said that I could trust him
He was my best friend
But how could I have been so dim?
How was I suppose to know this is how it would end?
It started with a beer
Then everything started to fade
My vision started to disappear
It must have been the beer he said he specially made
He took off all my clothes and gave me a big body hug
I tried to push him off
But I was to weak and drugged
He forced him self inside of me really deep
I struggled and struggled as hard as I could
But after a while I just fell asleep
After I woke up I was in unbearable pain
I just sat there and started to cry
I couldn't believe it, I started to go insane
I wanted to die
He was my best friend
But how could I have been so dim?
How was I suppose to know this is how it would end?
It started with a beer
Then everything started to fade
My vision started to disappear
It must have been the beer he said he specially made
He took off all my clothes and gave me a big body hug
I tried to push him off
But I was to weak and drugged
He forced him self inside of me really deep
I struggled and struggled as hard as I could
But after a while I just fell asleep
After I woke up I was in unbearable pain
I just sat there and started to cry
I couldn't believe it, I started to go insane
I wanted to die
Published 22nd Sep 2013
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22nd Sep 2013 3:13am
I'm so sorry to hear that this happened to you. No one should have to go through such a horrifying thing like this. . .
22nd Sep 2013 3:20am
Oh my goodness...this is so fucked up...people that take advantage of other this way should be hit with the darkest blows...
This write pierces the skin...nice...
This write pierces the skin...nice...
22nd Sep 2013 3:32am
22nd Sep 2013 4:15am
:( I really felt this.... Great write.
Now.... Can I assist you in cutting off his balls and making him swallow them? :)
Now.... Can I assist you in cutting off his balls and making him swallow them? :)
22nd Sep 2013 5:13am
This strikes a chord with me for several reasons; unfortunately they all have to do with women that care a lot. Well that and the university I attended for undergraduate studies.
Anytime someone can muster up the courage to write about an event like this you can't help but feel empathetic.
Thanks for sharing.
Anytime someone can muster up the courage to write about an event like this you can't help but feel empathetic.
Thanks for sharing.
22nd Sep 2013 1:00pm
I struggled and struggled as hard as I could
This is that moment, you have done what you can do, and now you are coming to terms with it.....Byron Katie asks us who we would be without the stores we tell.
Survival and understanding....what makes it worth the experiences we have is what we learned from them. Turning victimization into victory means telling your story in such a way that your learning is useful to yourself and others.
This is that moment, you have done what you can do, and now you are coming to terms with it.....Byron Katie asks us who we would be without the stores we tell.
Survival and understanding....what makes it worth the experiences we have is what we learned from them. Turning victimization into victory means telling your story in such a way that your learning is useful to yourself and others.
9th Jan 2014 11:41pm
People wear masks and sometimes we can't see past them. Your a strong person for bringing this out. Good write.
Anonymous
27th Jan 2014 9:45pm
wonderful write, sorry this had to happen to you i most likely would have inflicted suicide
