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I fancy him...
whatever this may be
and whatever this will be
I have come to think that
I am helplessly too far in
he has become a spark to
my flame
and I just hope that all that
will be left in the end,
is anything but ashes...
and whatever this will be
I have come to think that
I am helplessly too far in
he has become a spark to
my flame
and I just hope that all that
will be left in the end,
is anything but ashes...
Published 21st Sep 2013
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21st Sep 2013 6:22pm
21st Sep 2013 9:54pm
I've come to think ashes are associated with anything...sad (I guess). But thank you for the assurance, jagracia . xxx
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21st Sep 2013 9:49pm
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21st Sep 2013 9:56pm
I woke up instantly with all that on my mind.
Thank you for seeing the beauty in it, love.
Thank you for seeing the beauty in it, love.
22nd Sep 2013 1:01am
Whenever you associate ashes with such sadness,think of a phoenix. It rises from the ashes and so have you. With all your past experiences hunn.
Beautiful write xo
Beautiful write xo
22nd Sep 2013 12:59pm
Thank you Hyacinth. I'll have the mind of a Phoenix then. I think I've been sparked...
22nd Sep 2013 1:55am
22nd Sep 2013 1:02pm
