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Fields Of Gold~
Her olive skin
sunkissed
she is beauty
amongst
fields of gold
hair
like midnight
silk
falling on her
shoulders
gentle breeze
blowing
as delicate as
blooming
sunflower petals
stretching
she brightens
nature
sunkissed
she is beauty
amongst
fields of gold
hair
like midnight
silk
falling on her
shoulders
gentle breeze
blowing
as delicate as
blooming
sunflower petals
stretching
she brightens
nature
Published 21st Sep 2013
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2013 11:20am
Nice soothing write tl...strider!
21st Sep 2013 11:24am
21st Sep 2013 5:06pm
very delightful to read a peaceful poem like this from you i like the switch up
21st Sep 2013 6:35pm
21st Sep 2013 6:16pm
This was a pleasant, natural-feeling
kind of scribe from you TL.
The lady sounds like a beauty.
Beautiful write... Pan
kind of scribe from you TL.
The lady sounds like a beauty.
Beautiful write... Pan
21st Sep 2013 6:36pm
Anonymous
21st Sep 2013 6:31pm
Beautiful!
21st Sep 2013 6:37pm
21st Sep 2013 7:59pm
A different but no means less beautiful version on the title theme. (Remembering the song by Eva Cassidy referring to barley.)
21st Sep 2013 8:00pm
22nd Sep 2013 2:06am
22nd Sep 2013 2:35pm
