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Re: You and I
Anonymous
19th Sep 2013 8:40pm
Chi,
Nothing like the thrill of a good ride to get the heart beat racing! ; ) Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Nothing like the thrill of a good ride to get the heart beat racing! ; ) Enjoyed!!!
tornado

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re: Re: You and I
19th Sep 2013 8:42pm
Hahaha! Thanks, you made me laugh! You're so right! Although I meant it differently, as we both know *chuckle*. Sweet comment!
Re: You and I
Anonymous
19th Sep 2013 9:15pm
Makes me think of autumn to come, Chi, lovely lines and image!

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re: Re: You and I
20th Sep 2013 12:03pm
Was the result of the sight of a double rainbow when I passed the bridge over the canal when heading home ... They looked so upbeat! Thanks for your kind comment!
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19th Sep 2013 9:34pm
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20th Sep 2013 12:05pm
As rainbows are colorful I tried my best to put them into a haiku :-). Thank you, J.!
Re: You and I
Anonymous
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re: Re: You and I
20th Sep 2013 12:07pm
Bike??? I thought about sliding downwards the rainbow on my derrière! But nonetheless, thanks for your freshening comment, Gabriel! :-)!
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19th Sep 2013 11:13pm
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20th Sep 2013 12:08pm
Re: You and I
Anonymous
20th Sep 2013 2:02am
Love the feel of this gem, like a roller coaster ride. Very cleverly done Ms. Chi !!

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re: Re: You and I
20th Sep 2013 12:10pm
Thank you, Vee, glad you like it! Caught the colors and grabbed for a pen. Sometimes it works :-).
Re: You and I
20th Sep 2013 4:39am
I love the atmosphere of a carnival, fair with rides, I'm just not too crazy bout the rides lol... But hey the imagery was dead on ! :) lol
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re: Re: You and I
20th Sep 2013 1:01pm
Although no carnival atmosphere was intended since I get sick whith the rides, I very much appreaciate your comment and the read, Poe! Always nice to hearfrom you.
Re: You and I
Anonymous
20th Sep 2013 5:33am
Wonderful collision of images here Iris. Great, entertaining read! :-)
Peace
Carlene
Peace
Carlene

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re: Re: You and I
20th Sep 2013 1:03pm
Haha! You envisioned me bumping and bouncing over the rainbows, did you? Thank you for the read and the kind words, Carlene!
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20th Sep 2013 1:03pm