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The feeling of Loneliness
Unlike a flower
it grows in the darkness
of my thoughts
blossoming into self-pity and
self-loathing
Like a pimp
it sells my soul to the
hungry, lust-filled wickedness
for it to do as it pleases
with me
Like a malignant tumour
at the pit of my stomach
it spreads
making its presence known
and felt
Much like the four chambers
of my heart
it keeps me behind bars
incarcerating me for life
And so much like a parasite
it burrows itself deeper
into my being
consuming any sense of belonging
that I might feel
it grows in the darkness
of my thoughts
blossoming into self-pity and
self-loathing
Like a pimp
it sells my soul to the
hungry, lust-filled wickedness
for it to do as it pleases
with me
Like a malignant tumour
at the pit of my stomach
it spreads
making its presence known
and felt
Much like the four chambers
of my heart
it keeps me behind bars
incarcerating me for life
And so much like a parasite
it burrows itself deeper
into my being
consuming any sense of belonging
that I might feel
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Re: The feeling of Loneliness
15th Sep 2013 6:42pm
The road is a lover itself; tangential to our walk, it opens in front of us with every step and seduces us. We, dancing to our beat, tango or not; why not? In that 5 by 10 space I am free to my heart's content. How much room do you need? You are making me think, Girl....dangerous moves.
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re: Re: The feeling of Loneliness
15th Sep 2013 7:15pm
Ah,the forbidden dance. Who could resist that? If then we're free to our heart's content then I might need the whole dance floor. Such freedom can not be caged in such a small confinement.
Re: The feeling of Loneliness
Philosophical tendencies dear friend. Haha [nudge]
Let us have the dance floor, and gradually learn the dance moves of the world but not become totally ingested by its lack of wayward.
I love the personification use :)
Grand work.
Let us have the dance floor, and gradually learn the dance moves of the world but not become totally ingested by its lack of wayward.
I love the personification use :)
Grand work.
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re: Re: The feeling of Loneliness
15th Sep 2013 8:16pm
Re: The feeling of Loneliness
15th Sep 2013 8:40pm
I especially like the first and last stanza's, but enjoyed the whole thing.
LMZ
LMZ
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re: Re: The feeling of Loneliness
15th Sep 2013 9:11pm
I'm happy you liked any part (: Thank you for taking the time to read me and to comment,LMZ xo
Re: The feeling of Loneliness
Anonymous
16th Sep 2013 1:03am
Such sad undertones my dear Hyacinth, you have a way with your pen, good job!
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