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A Surging Covet !!!
Your thoughts
residing in the nest
crawling towards my soul
for the touch so secure.
Your eyes
killing with a glimpse
Speaking all shades
of those used red blades.
Your hands
finally slip into my clothes
traveling with unknown map
For reaching destination without mishap.
Your style
Surrendering like never before
Creating a creepy way
Of making flesh love sway.
Your kisses
hugging me with love
igniting flames
for flooding with waves.
Your thirst
to eat me up instantly
marks to the passionate start
Of slipping into the parts.
residing in the nest
crawling towards my soul
for the touch so secure.
Your eyes
killing with a glimpse
Speaking all shades
of those used red blades.
Your hands
finally slip into my clothes
traveling with unknown map
For reaching destination without mishap.
Your style
Surrendering like never before
Creating a creepy way
Of making flesh love sway.
Your kisses
hugging me with love
igniting flames
for flooding with waves.
Your thirst
to eat me up instantly
marks to the passionate start
Of slipping into the parts.
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14th Sep 2013 9:09pm
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16th Sep 2013 9:18am
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14th Sep 2013 9:34pm
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14th Sep 2013 9:50pm
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16th Sep 2013 9:25am
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14th Sep 2013 10:10pm
Wonderful buildup, Brinda. The various stages of a passionate relationship. Lovely!
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16th Sep 2013 9:27am
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 10:58pm
Nice ending, pulls the whole piece together. Very good!
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16th Sep 2013 9:28am
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 11:11pm
Excellent write and flow Brinda
Well done...
Strider
Well done...
Strider
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16th Sep 2013 9:28am
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15th Sep 2013 1:08am
Very interested piece, Brinda! Type of ink that has me silently pondering and processing each line. :)
I like when ink makes me think! :) Nice! Xo
I like when ink makes me think! :) Nice! Xo
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16th Sep 2013 9:30am
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16th Sep 2013 9:44am
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15th Sep 2013 7:25am
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16th Sep 2013 9:45am
I feel honored reaching such a beautiful comment. *blush blush* . This smile is not going away. Many thanks :)
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16th Sep 2013 9:46am
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15th Sep 2013 6:51pm
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16th Sep 2013 6:45am
This is the kind of stuff that leaves members of the opposite sex speechless! Oh so nice!
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9th Oct 2013 8:58am
Feels like in describing the other person you ended up finding out more about your capacity to love.
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10th Oct 2013 4:05pm
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11th Oct 2013 5:48am
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28th Oct 2013 6:17am
I love this piece sweets!!
Very well written!
You gave Great pen sweets!!!
Sir Lancelott
Very well written!
You gave Great pen sweets!!!
Sir Lancelott
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28th Oct 2013 6:51am
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29th Oct 2013 10:09am
Wonderer, worshipper, lover of leaving.
It doesn't matter.
Ours is not a caravan of despair.
Come, even if you have broken your vow
a thousand times
Come, yet again, come, come.
It doesn't matter.
Ours is not a caravan of despair.
Come, even if you have broken your vow
a thousand times
Come, yet again, come, come.
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29th Oct 2013 10:14am
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6th Nov 2013 11:26am
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20th Nov 2013 12:51pm
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21st Nov 2013 5:20am
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24th Dec 2013 7:38pm
Liked the build up to the last two verses (my favourite).
I make sense of the title with difficulty, wonder if this is not a misspelling. To my English, 'covet' is a verb meaning to desire enviously. (eg Tenth Commandment in Bible's Old Testament; You shall not covet your neighbour's wife etc.)
I make sense of the title with difficulty, wonder if this is not a misspelling. To my English, 'covet' is a verb meaning to desire enviously. (eg Tenth Commandment in Bible's Old Testament; You shall not covet your neighbour's wife etc.)
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25th Dec 2013 6:35am
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