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tasting her skin…
kiss me everywhere she said,
in an unguarded moment -
my tongue exploring
her body,
her soul
becoming my palate…
in an unguarded moment -
my tongue exploring
her body,
her soul
becoming my palate…
Published 13th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2013 11:33pm
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14th Sep 2013 5:09am
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14th Sep 2013 9:14pm
If the words
themselves
are clean.
Words that paint with
hate and ire
will never
show brilliance.
Your poems are clean and
I admire your style.
themselves
are clean.
Words that paint with
hate and ire
will never
show brilliance.
Your poems are clean and
I admire your style.
Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 00:59am
beautiful jagracia...another little gem.
thanks strider
thanks strider
14th Sep 2013 5:10am
14th Sep 2013 2:13am
Ahhhh...paint my body with tongue's tip...
Dipped in the rainbow colors of passion.
Your pen is the brush upon the parchment, My Friend! <3
Dipped in the rainbow colors of passion.
Your pen is the brush upon the parchment, My Friend! <3
14th Sep 2013 5:12am
your comment is a poem unto itself.
may your body someday be adorned
by an artist's passion
may your body someday be adorned
by an artist's passion
14th Sep 2013 9:25pm
Impressive and soulful. The landscape of a body explored by a tongue's meandering path. Seductive write, J..
14th Sep 2013 11:59pm
