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alternative source of guidance
Oh dear feet
Won't you guide me?
I can't let my heart do that anymore
'Cause it leads me astray
It takes me to places I don't want to go to
Won't you guide me?
I can't let my heart do that anymore
'Cause it leads me astray
It takes me to places I don't want to go to
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Re: alternative source of guidance
13th Sep 2013 11:52am
this is very beautiful..I
love the poignancy and
the thought of just drift
ing, walking where you
will...great poem..:)
love the poignancy and
the thought of just drift
ing, walking where you
will...great poem..:)
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re: Re: alternative source of guidance
13th Sep 2013 12:01pm
Thank you,dart. And thank you for taking the time to read it and comment on it (:
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2013 11:52am
So very loud and clear and so very true and so very simple...nice little ditty...its good to seek such guidance on two feet outside in nature. Seems to work every time....for both children and adults!
strider
strider

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re: Re: alternative source of guidance
13th Sep 2013 5:59pm
Better the feet than the heart. My mind over-analyzes and over-calculates even the smallest of things. :(
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2013 6:15pm
Nice write Miss H..:)
darn those fickle hearts! meant to lead you into the fray, win or lose the only way out is on foot 'cause the heart will either be broken or too damn confounded with 'what ifs' and 'maybe's' to know which way to go ..lol
Thanks 'Cinth
darn those fickle hearts! meant to lead you into the fray, win or lose the only way out is on foot 'cause the heart will either be broken or too damn confounded with 'what ifs' and 'maybe's' to know which way to go ..lol
Thanks 'Cinth

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Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 2:26am
On Hyacinth, this could've been my poem, my heart gets me in trouble all the time lol

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