hearing her voice…

A beautifully sad conundrum...and, you wrote it so well jagracia.

strider

sometimes two people are bound
together though physically apart

it might take more than one lifetime
to master...

Although the "never apart" might feel like a blessing it may also turn out to be a curse since you'd perhaps never be able to let go and heal. However, in its shortness it's a first-rate story poem.

a love that binds would not be a curse

But a love that hurts.

I think Chi is right, it's a
double edged sword, which
makes it such a good poem...

I've been balancing on a knife's edge
all my life. It keeps me sharp.

That you are.

As dartford: Exactly, that's why it's such a good poem.

<3

Ditto dartford.

Graceful work ,jag.

thanks, charmaine

merci, mon ami

The poem and comments hit me hard. That's all I say thru the tears. Well done! :)

thanks, i'm happy you felt it too

Don't let the silences grow too long.

hard to do sometimes

I am a man of few words

Perfectly said...

thanks for reading