watching her face…

very true, we just have to keep
our eyes open

I think this is the
type of writing
that invites the
reader in...
concise &
real...love it,
jag...

Thanks, d. Of course you are always
welcome, the door is on the latch...

okey dokey, the
next time I need
to borrow some
sugar...I'll pop
over..:)

Heartbreaking, excellent scribe of small package with big impact on the imagination.
Enjoyed the read :)

thanks for reading, vee

Oh ya! Face and eyes always talk louder than words. Good to see you writing! Xoxo :)

Thanks. I had an inspiration.

You do these concise masterpieces so well.

real life is a fount of ideas

When our looks betray
what else can we say?

It's amazing. The sentiments and pictures which this catching poem evoke run like a film before my inner eye. You're really good, J.!

Thanks. Just trying to get to the essence of things...

That's why you're good since that's exactly what you achieve.

Yep jagracia....nice sad write but with simple resignation

strider

You got it exactly, S.

I'm glad you find them so