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leaving in the dark...
reclining in the
back of the black
cab so early in
the morning,
I am left won
dering if you will
still be here when
I come back...
Published 11th Sep 2013
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11th Sep 2013 11:31pm
both forlorn and hopeful, two opposing
emotions held simultaneously,
leaving us in the dark with
the narrator. A fine poem, d.
emotions held simultaneously,
leaving us in the dark with
the narrator. A fine poem, d.
11th Sep 2013 11:39pm
thanks, jag...there was
enough going on around
this time for me to consider
making it into a short
story...but you know my
ways by now, it would
have been a paragraph
at best..:)
enough going on around
this time for me to consider
making it into a short
story...but you know my
ways by now, it would
have been a paragraph
at best..:)
11th Sep 2013 11:51pm
12th Sep 2013 7:16am
It suffices
when so few words
make it a paragraph
in someone's mind.
That you always achieve.
Wonderful poem, dartford.
when so few words
make it a paragraph
in someone's mind.
That you always achieve.
Wonderful poem, dartford.
13th Sep 2013 2:38pm
thee un'ease of leavings....
where
goes the leaver and the left-behind?
