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Unrelented tears
It's raining tonight
and just like the sky
my eyes are pouring
What happened to that euphoric high
that I had just a day ago?
I don't want to cry
but I can't control it
I don't know what it's caused by
and it doesn't really matter
'cause I just want this pain to die
so that I can breathe life into happiness
and just like the sky
my eyes are pouring
What happened to that euphoric high
that I had just a day ago?
I don't want to cry
but I can't control it
I don't know what it's caused by
and it doesn't really matter
'cause I just want this pain to die
so that I can breathe life into happiness
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Re: Unrelented tears
Anonymous
11th Sep 2013 7:43pm
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11th Sep 2013 7:58pm
And those fruits of life seem to be permanent. But then,before we know it,they are gone. And just like that,we are left disillusioned. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts,Michael. And I'm honoured to be a part of your list (:
Re: Unrelented tears
11th Sep 2013 8:12pm
I feel these words to my core Cinth. Your sadness is beautifully expressed.
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Last time you told me to drink rooibos...guess what I'm doing now? :D
Thank you,Mia xo
Thank you,Mia xo
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12th Sep 2013 7:31am
Aaaawww my sweet girl, you poor thing. Add a little honey to the tea, have a bath with a little lavender, patchouli and ylang-ylang oils en n moerse slab dairy milk, dit werk wonders.
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11th Sep 2013 8:30pm
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11th Sep 2013 8:48pm
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I don't like it :( and it seems to be happening a lot lately.
Distance yourself from what/who?
Distance yourself from what/who?
Re: Unrelented tears
Anonymous
11th Sep 2013 8:56pm
oh Hyacinth, you need a big hug, it's okay girl, it'll be alright.
You're always so expressive, beautiful piece :)
You're always so expressive, beautiful piece :)

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11th Sep 2013 9:04pm
Re: Unrelented tears
Anonymous
11th Sep 2013 9:09pm
What can I say or do to give you reason to smile 'Cinth? I like your poem but hate what it means.
I wish you the immediate return of the euphoria you were feeling just so recently. :)
I wish you the immediate return of the euphoria you were feeling just so recently. :)

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11th Sep 2013 9:14pm
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Re: Unrelented tears
Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 10:47am
Tomorrow is another day hyacinth
strider
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Re: Unrelented tears
29th Sep 2013 10:09pm
I do remember that night. it was someone's birthday and it was raining in Eldos a bit.
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29th Sep 2013 10:53pm