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Fighting for Me
I'm drowning in a sea of hopelessness
It's rhythm is a wave resisted by my love shore
Encouraged by the wind of your rejection
I am fierce and I'm persistent
Yet in nature there's objection
I'm drowning in a sea of hopelessness
lurking in the dangers of its openness
I'm drowning in a sea of hopelessness
I am alone, his heart emotionless
I am dying in a sea of hopelessness
King of wind let me show you my devotedness.
It's rhythm is a wave resisted by my love shore
Encouraged by the wind of your rejection
I am fierce and I'm persistent
Yet in nature there's objection
I'm drowning in a sea of hopelessness
lurking in the dangers of its openness
I'm drowning in a sea of hopelessness
I am alone, his heart emotionless
I am dying in a sea of hopelessness
King of wind let me show you my devotedness.
Published 11th Sep 2013
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13th Sep 2013 3:37pm
Smooth ink lady, although I'm not sure about devotedness
I think it's supposed to be written as two- devoted ness
But then again hey, I take poetic liberties ALL the time! lol
I think it's supposed to be written as two- devoted ness
But then again hey, I take poetic liberties ALL the time! lol
19th Sep 2013 7:16pm
Anonymous
15th Jan 2015 6:37pm
Brilliant ink..
Dave
Dave
