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Beautiful~
My truth is beautiful
my silent voice speaking
hushed words from my
soft lavender lips
My blue veins flowing
with fascination as my
flower blossom releases
my beautiful spirit
My freckled skin shivers
under his beautiful thrill
as he drags me across
his mysterious body
My sapphire stare crept
into his deep brown eyes
feasting on his beautiful
mind as we crumbled
my silent voice speaking
hushed words from my
soft lavender lips
My blue veins flowing
with fascination as my
flower blossom releases
my beautiful spirit
My freckled skin shivers
under his beautiful thrill
as he drags me across
his mysterious body
My sapphire stare crept
into his deep brown eyes
feasting on his beautiful
mind as we crumbled
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re: Re: Beautiful~
11th Sep 2013 3:27pm
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11th Sep 2013 5:39pm
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11th Sep 2013 9:02pm
Re: Beautiful~
11th Sep 2013 7:33pm
Echo Theo, the pic fits what the poem builds up to. Like way you make the "nether lips" speak.
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11th Sep 2013 9:02pm
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Anonymous
11th Sep 2013 8:26pm
Wow this is absolutley beautiful!

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11th Sep 2013 9:03pm
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12th Sep 2013 4:56am
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11th Sep 2013 11:44pm
Love the poem, the use of ellipses inside. And choice of words... very nice!
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12th Sep 2013 4:57am
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Anonymous
11th Sep 2013 11:49pm
Lovely with hints of sexual undertones, good scribe!

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12th Sep 2013 4:58am
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13th Sep 2013 1:12am
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 10:54am
Nicely written tl.
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13th Sep 2013 1:13am
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13th Sep 2013 1:09am
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