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Flames~
His trembling voice
her quivering body
they were entwined
but never joined
She moaned in between
the shadows of his
sweet orgasmic words
fueling his flames
Instant fire burning deep
binding them in their
bones as they wear their
lust on their skin for the other
her quivering body
they were entwined
but never joined
She moaned in between
the shadows of his
sweet orgasmic words
fueling his flames
Instant fire burning deep
binding them in their
bones as they wear their
lust on their skin for the other
Published 10th Sep 2013
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10th Sep 2013 5:56pm
10th Sep 2013 8:32pm
Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 5:57pm
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10th Sep 2013 8:33pm
Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 7:22pm
that sizzled tl!
strider
strider
10th Sep 2013 8:33pm
Literally hot read! I (rightly as turned out) sensed from the title alone there would be fiery passion in it.
10th Sep 2013 8:35pm
10th Sep 2013 9:04pm
'never joined': an intimate relationship absent of bodily contact. romantic & passionate, w/o conjugality...
10th Sep 2013 10:46pm
Anonymous
11th Sep 2013 00:38am
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11th Sep 2013 2:14am
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Sep 2013 4:37pm
11th Sep 2013 11:05am
I absolutely love it. Carefully chosen words that convey unbridled passion that leaves you feeling naked. I really like it.
11th Sep 2013 1:03pm
Anonymous
11th Sep 2013 11:51pm
{She moaned in between
the shadows of his
sweet orgasmic words
fueling his flames }
Perfect, right there is the essence of the poem, well done!
the shadows of his
sweet orgasmic words
fueling his flames }
Perfect, right there is the essence of the poem, well done!
12th Sep 2013 4:59am
