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No more blood-work
I remember
the days when
I used to paint
my walls with
blood and tears
When the thought
of blood (for my
paintings) running
out never bothered
me - my heart was
a bleeding resevoir
that could never be
emptied of its
contents
Now I paint
my walls with
bright colours
of laughter and
happiness
Colours that
uplift the soul
and give it a
reason to rejoice,
to celebrate, to
soar the open
skies of a
mended heart
the days when
I used to paint
my walls with
blood and tears
When the thought
of blood (for my
paintings) running
out never bothered
me - my heart was
a bleeding resevoir
that could never be
emptied of its
contents
Now I paint
my walls with
bright colours
of laughter and
happiness
Colours that
uplift the soul
and give it a
reason to rejoice,
to celebrate, to
soar the open
skies of a
mended heart
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Re: No more blood-work
Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 5:31am
It's nice to see it end optimistically, we all want a happy ending. Good scribe.

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re: Re: No more blood-work
10th Sep 2013 5:38am
Most of my poems have been depressing and I felt that I should at least have one with a happy ending. Thank you for reading it and for commenting,Vee (:
Re: No more blood-work
Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 6:56am
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Re: No more blood-work
10th Sep 2013 7:18am
Pink!! Paint in pink ^.^
this is lovely Cinth, enjoyed the happy ending.
As an aside... Your poems are not "depressing"; they're real :)
this is lovely Cinth, enjoyed the happy ending.
As an aside... Your poems are not "depressing"; they're real :)
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Re: No more blood-work
10th Sep 2013 8:41am
Purple used to be my favourite colour :D Thank you,Theo (:
Ooh,pink is preeeetty. I'm glad you did,Mia. And thank you for that outlook (:
Ooh,pink is preeeetty. I'm glad you did,Mia. And thank you for that outlook (:
Re: No more blood-work
Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 9:54am
About time somebody realizes a nice reality hyacinth. I think you inspired me for a similar write...thanks.
Strider
Strider

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re: Re: No more blood-work
10th Sep 2013 9:59am
Re: No more blood-work
Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 10:15am
Great positive poem. Don't ever leave out purple!!!!! You will have to answer to me!!! Lol!

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re: Re: No more blood-work
10th Sep 2013 3:49pm
Re: No more blood-work
10th Sep 2013 4:21pm
Used to paint with blood n tears huh?
seems like u were really of cash for acrylic
paints! lol jk... The imagery in this was intense
as was the write, love the positive ending :)
seems like u were really of cash for acrylic
paints! lol jk... The imagery in this was intense
as was the write, love the positive ending :)
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Re: No more blood-work
10th Sep 2013 4:35pm
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10th Sep 2013 6:06pm