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Final Sunset
the sun's now setting
as you slowly become my
everything..
† to my Dearest 22/2/2010
as you slowly become my
everything..
† to my Dearest 22/2/2010
Published 30th Dec 2010
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30th Dec 2010 11:57pm
you do a really great job of painting a wonderful picture with simple, direct language
31st Dec 2010 11:10am
31st Dec 2010 11:34am
And I can't imagine anything beyond that. Your dearest is so lucky. Your every word is like a jewel crowned by perfect artistry.
31st Dec 2010 11:39am
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19th Jan 2011 11:31pm
your writing is like the finest jewels upon a jewellers fine collection shelf. please keep writing .. you inspire me :)
19th Jan 2011 11:43pm
