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Red Satin- Pt. 3- The Artist
Red Satin
Pt 3- The Artist- September 7, 2013
The effect is a divine and stinging rush,
I drink it in, cherishing the taste,
Cinnamon and copper, so addictive
A curious little sensation, beautiful,
So morbid and comforting
Obsession, habit and dark inspiration stirrs
And I embrace my silver scalpel
I am the artist, sculpting my inner torment
To beautiful crimson perfection
All of it races hot from my veins,
Escaping down my ivory canvas as the
Tangled strings of my mania unravel,
and I am enveloped in the rapture
of sweet, red satin.
Pt 3- The Artist- September 7, 2013
The effect is a divine and stinging rush,
I drink it in, cherishing the taste,
Cinnamon and copper, so addictive
A curious little sensation, beautiful,
So morbid and comforting
Obsession, habit and dark inspiration stirrs
And I embrace my silver scalpel
I am the artist, sculpting my inner torment
To beautiful crimson perfection
All of it races hot from my veins,
Escaping down my ivory canvas as the
Tangled strings of my mania unravel,
and I am enveloped in the rapture
of sweet, red satin.
Published 8th Sep 2013
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8th Sep 2013 9:45pm
I was perusing the latest poems and came across this one: part 3. So I went to part one and read it all of the way through to this one. Very Good imagery. On a critiquing note, perhaps dropping many of the commas sprinkled throughout your work would make the flow a bit more smooth. Each line gives breaks in between thoughts and many times proves sufficient...just a thought. Well done tho. I enjoyed the read
10th Sep 2013 11:24pm
Well thank you very much :)
Yes i noticed that too about the commas, thank you for pointing that out to me. Your comment is much appreciated!
Yes i noticed that too about the commas, thank you for pointing that out to me. Your comment is much appreciated!
Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 00:18am
This is a delicacy of dark and
twisted, yet so eloquently put.
Enjoyed!
twisted, yet so eloquently put.
Enjoyed!
10th Sep 2013 11:48pm
