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smooth cruising
cocoon of steel and leather,
throttle and thrust forwards
outside of time
streaks and dashes whirr under
tarmac-heated treads of rubber,
preys of speed
static blast search tunes,
food to the gods of vroom
shift to fifth
now, cruise, baby, cruise
Published 8th Sep 2013
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Nothing ahead but the vast endless highway... crank the tunes....pedal to the metal..lean back and cruise into forever in the dream machine....o, hell yeah!
Thanks for the ride, Atakti! Wild, and wicked fun, to be sure!
Thanks for the ride, Atakti! Wild, and wicked fun, to be sure!
8th Sep 2013 10:03pm
8th Sep 2013 8:40pm
8th Sep 2013 10:03pm
Anonymous
8th Sep 2013 9:54pm
"Preys of Speed" indeed! Awesome, Deus Ex Machina! Mike
8th Sep 2013 10:04pm
You spotted the preys, huh? Keep that motor running, Mike.
Thanks for stopping by.
Thanks for stopping by.
8th Sep 2013 10:05pm
Her jabs are smooth and fluid, forcing him to retreat against the ropes, body shot combination bends him, savage uppercut between the eyes breaks him. Knock out, baby!
Have you been smokin' rubber in the Mini Cooper again?
Great driving poem Atakti. I'd wish you luck, but it's a competition. ;)
Have you been smokin' rubber in the Mini Cooper again?
Great driving poem Atakti. I'd wish you luck, but it's a competition. ;)
8th Sep 2013 10:31pm
May the best driver win...
Thanks for the entertaining comments, Case... You knew I wouldn't resist a driving comp, heh.
;)
Thanks for the entertaining comments, Case... You knew I wouldn't resist a driving comp, heh.
;)
8th Sep 2013 11:38pm
nice
there is a song by mike ness called "she's in love with my car" that i can totally see tank girl rollin to right now....
good stuff miss A
there is a song by mike ness called "she's in love with my car" that i can totally see tank girl rollin to right now....
good stuff miss A
9th Sep 2013 5:28am
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 8:25pm
Smooth cruising? sounds like motor cycle mama from hell.....lol
Always like your motor cycle rides! Atakti
Always like your motor cycle rides! Atakti
11th Sep 2013 8:21pm
Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 9:51pm
Cool ink, Atakti. Enjoyed the word play in this well-written piece. Great read! :-)
Peace
Carlene
Peace
Carlene
11th Sep 2013 8:21pm
13th Sep 2013 3:49pm
Cruise? Sounds like SPEEDING to me!! lol not that I mind
I'm down! just watch out for 'Smokie!' lol
excellent ink :)
I'm down! just watch out for 'Smokie!' lol
excellent ink :)
13th Sep 2013 6:39pm
13th Sep 2013 8:39pm
Baby the things i would do to get inside your head. to know the meaning behind the cryptic perfection. i love it.
