Haiku XXVI

Thanks, Gabriel! The sky is always mystical!

transient meteors and feelings,
spread against the milky way,
cosmic

And sometimes they get lost there,
become
cosmic dust.
But hey, why not?

Is the third line intended to read "FEEL at your side" (sensual overtone)or "FELL at your side" (usually associated with shooting stars that come to earth)?

It is indeed intended to read "feel" since it's the sequel to the first line. Though "fell" is possible and good, too, it's not intended here because somehow negatively connotated. But it is an interestig toehold!
Thank you for your profound comments, new interpretations and your open mind.

I sensed sensuality in this piece. Nice juxtaposition of ideas/images. Lovely work, Iris! :-)

Peace
Carlene

I tried to express how I feel with (and why I fell for) my husband :-). The sensual note is clearly ostensible :-). Thank you, as always, for your encouraging and kind comments, Carlene!

a poem of light & movement
and relationship...I like it
a lot..!

Glad you like it :-). I intended it to be positive!