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THATS LIFE
Some people are rich, some are poor
not everyone has got a front door
some sleep rough in shop doorways
or on the footpath, same place always
they don't have to do that
there are places they can go
we can all choose
that is life.
Some are drug addicts
others may be alcoholics
some well educated,
others not be
most will have seen life
and life is an education
some will seek help not all
we all make mistakes
some more than others
even on d.u. poetry
we make mistakes
that is life
we have to get on with it
if you want a friend
you have got to be a friend
that is life
not everyone has got a front door
some sleep rough in shop doorways
or on the footpath, same place always
they don't have to do that
there are places they can go
we can all choose
that is life.
Some are drug addicts
others may be alcoholics
some well educated,
others not be
most will have seen life
and life is an education
some will seek help not all
we all make mistakes
some more than others
even on d.u. poetry
we make mistakes
that is life
we have to get on with it
if you want a friend
you have got to be a friend
that is life
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Anonymous
8th Sep 2013 8:28am
Very true statement my friend. "That's Life" and we carry in past the mistakes. Good write! :)
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8th Sep 2013 8:47am
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8th Sep 2013 10:12pm
If idealistic and realistic are the only two option it is quite easy to see were this writing lands. Any inspiration from the song made famous by Frank Sinatra?
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Re: THATS LIFE
8th Sep 2013 11:05pm
no inspiration from frank even though I like him thanks very much for your comment
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9th Sep 2013 3:44am
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9th Sep 2013 1:40pm
That is indeed a true ending statement/ stanza! A great message piece my friend, well done!
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14th Sep 2013 9:30am
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Re: THATS LIFE
22nd Jun 2015 5:24pm
I enjoy the kindness in your poetry. I've read several, they have brightened my day.
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22nd Jun 2015 10:16pm