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spray
The deep blue ocean
roars in might
as the currents
tell tales of travels
in ancient tongues
decoded as they
crash unto the rocks
splashing in an elegant dance
oceanic spray,destined for beauty
such beauty
roars in might
as the currents
tell tales of travels
in ancient tongues
decoded as they
crash unto the rocks
splashing in an elegant dance
oceanic spray,destined for beauty
such beauty
Published 7th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
7th Sep 2013 3:41pm
Really like this poem of yours, you captured the sea well with your words, the splashing waves are almost visible whilst reading...
Anonymous
7th Sep 2013 4:22pm
I really like this, very poetically
put..the dance of nature so to speak..
Fave lines:tell tales of travels
in ancient tongues
decoded
splashing in an elegant dance
Enjoyed:)
put..the dance of nature so to speak..
Fave lines:tell tales of travels
in ancient tongues
decoded
splashing in an elegant dance
Enjoyed:)
