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she gave him a life
She spent 23 years taking
care of him (he had,still has, no job);
clothing him,feeding him, pulling
him up when he was down, caring
for him - loving him
He spent 23 years loathing
her,claiming that she was
suffocating him, immasculating
him - he wanted out yet he
stayed for the freebies she was
giving him
She stayed despite the beatings,
the lying,the cheating... because
she believed he would change or
at least he would find a way to
show his gratitude
He compares her to Proverbs
31: 10-31 yet he says she's
not for him - all her good
qualities are over-shadowed
by her "black" soul
This she found (when she
was cleaning his side of their
room) scribbled on a sheet of
paper and she soon realised
that she was just his host -
their marriage meant nothing
to him... he never even loved her.
care of him (he had,still has, no job);
clothing him,feeding him, pulling
him up when he was down, caring
for him - loving him
He spent 23 years loathing
her,claiming that she was
suffocating him, immasculating
him - he wanted out yet he
stayed for the freebies she was
giving him
She stayed despite the beatings,
the lying,the cheating... because
she believed he would change or
at least he would find a way to
show his gratitude
He compares her to Proverbs
31: 10-31 yet he says she's
not for him - all her good
qualities are over-shadowed
by her "black" soul
This she found (when she
was cleaning his side of their
room) scribbled on a sheet of
paper and she soon realised
that she was just his host -
their marriage meant nothing
to him... he never even loved her.
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