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Re: Haiku XXV
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- Edited 4th Sep 2013 8:43pm
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4th Sep 2013 8:46pm
Re: Haiku XXV
Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 9:02pm
Chi,
They say dreams are the theatres of the soul. Enjoyed!!!
tornado
They say dreams are the theatres of the soul. Enjoyed!!!
tornado

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re: Re: Haiku XXV
4th Sep 2013 9:17pm
Yes, they possibly are. Souls sometimes seems to enjoy themselves in dreams :-). Glad you enjoyed!
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4th Sep 2013 9:19pm
as sensuous an image
as I've seen, in physicality
and feeling...great poem :)
as I've seen, in physicality
and feeling...great poem :)
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re: Re: Haiku XXV
4th Sep 2013 9:38pm
Would love to respond adecuately, but can't since I don't know if my words made sense :-). All I can do is to thank you with all my heart for your kind words.
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4th Sep 2013 9:21pm
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4th Sep 2013 9:43pm
You could make it a waking dream if you wanted. And those sleeping ones, they accompany and inspire you the whole day. Not bad, either!
Thanks, dear J.!
Thanks, dear J.!
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5th Sep 2013 12:29pm
Re: Haiku XXV
5th Sep 2013 5:18am
Men would particularly relate to that description of waking up excited....but alone.
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5th Sep 2013 12:33pm
I know, Solomon! Though a woman, too, might awake excited after a sensual dream. And not necessarily alone :-).
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8th Sep 2013 8:53pm
awakening is when you really enjoy such a dream. for that brief moment...
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8th Sep 2013 9:06pm
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