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The Hooker with a Soul
He sat there,
With his hand on his chin,
Coming across his stubble.
He had so much words unsaid,
His words mixed and mashed.
He sat with discontent eyes,
Blurred vision from the tears welling up in his eyes.
She slept with such radiance.
Her chest rose with such grace.
He blinked hard.
His tears fell.
Expressing every pain possible,
Every frustration battled.
She was here one night only,
He knew she wouldn't be staying long...
With his hand on his chin,
Coming across his stubble.
He had so much words unsaid,
His words mixed and mashed.
He sat with discontent eyes,
Blurred vision from the tears welling up in his eyes.
She slept with such radiance.
Her chest rose with such grace.
He blinked hard.
His tears fell.
Expressing every pain possible,
Every frustration battled.
She was here one night only,
He knew she wouldn't be staying long...
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Re: The Hooker with a Soul
1st Sep 2013 7:30am
Falling for someone that's only there for one night? It's sad really.
Nice poem (:
Nice poem (:
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1st Sep 2013 8:08am
Re: The Hooker with a Soul
1st Sep 2013 8:03am
it's a well displayed scene. never a good idea to fall in love w/a hooker...
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re: Re: The Hooker with a Soul
1st Sep 2013 8:12am
Sometimes humans fall weak to things we can't even begin to explain. Thanks John (:
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Re: The Hooker with a Soul
1st Sep 2013 12:07pm
:) Falling in love with the rain is one of the greatest loves..haha. Thanks !
Re: The Hooker with a Soul
1st Sep 2013 2:40pm
I agree with Gabriel... it's like loving the unattainable.
Charmaine this is penned with such grace and poise, it's simply breathtaking to read.
Charmaine this is penned with such grace and poise, it's simply breathtaking to read.
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1st Sep 2013 2:53pm
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