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Tethered To The Wall
Tethered to the wall
She writhes in anticipation
She hears the hiss of the crop
Cutting through still air
Each cell in her body
Waits for its touch
That thin line between pain
And pleasure vanishes
As it lands again and again
She writhes in anticipation
She hears the hiss of the crop
Cutting through still air
Each cell in her body
Waits for its touch
That thin line between pain
And pleasure vanishes
As it lands again and again
Published 25th Dec 2010
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27th Dec 2010 2:48am
19th Jan 2011 1:49am
I like how although you are the 'dom' you concentrate in this piece on what she must be thinking at the time and that shows a little bit of affection there even through the pain which I like. I agree on the fine line between passion and aggression, the two go rather beautifully together.
29th Jan 2011 6:12am
Thanks. Contrary to popular perception, largely created by mindless porn industry, doms are not thoughtless about the subs. It is not a one-way plunder and loot. It is a two-way traffic of love and passion.
Sorry about the late response though :-)
