Inevitability

I consider my poems a success if anyone experiences a thought or a feeling
by reading them. As you suggest, this poem can be read on several levels,
the spiritual, the physical, and the emotional. Often I don't even know
what I'm writing about until after it's written. This poem appeared to me
in a dream and I wrote it down before I forget it. Strange how that works.

Sweetly short, yet kick-starts the brain with so many scenarios. I like.

Thanks for reading

It's funny how words written so plainly and simply can hold so much meaning. U're good (:

I am a man of few words.
Thanks for commenting.

to be still...
to still be...

still is a great word,
great poem, jag

Indeed, an Old English word
of great versatility

My heart responds:

he moved
away

still

she loved
him

A man of few words. Yes. But all the more words to tear apart and put together again. Simply complex, I'd say. Heartfelt write, J.
Chi

I'm glad you felt my message, Chi.
But of course, you always do.

Thank you, dear J.. I try and am glad to find access to your precious thoughts respectivley their poetical realization. Always deeply enjoy your work.

This can go so many ways. "She moved away", to me. LOL!!!! Means that you are not as close to each other like before but there is still love there. Only because I see myself this way. When I don't hear from people I just silently move away heart wise. This has brought tears. :(

BTW......this my favorite painting. :)

Again, I am transparent and you have seen
through to the core. Tears? You have no idea.