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Falling back in Mind...
He’s at it again... alone, and staring at her picture
Lost within the image, just wishing he could kiss her
Speaking to his heart, it begs-
"come take me lover I am yours"
Then dark trepidation overwhelms him,
as he slumps to the floor...
Can’t begin to love her,
no, no his heart wouldn’t dare
Apprehensive of love’s true intention,
as if he doesn’t care
He’s erected himself a barrier yet,
it’s filled with many holes
Damaged from the times,
when love made weak his hold
So when to life came
his heart’s desires he'd hidden down deep
She threw out her arms invitingly,
expecting he’d make the leap
But he gave pause...
once he heard mind's echoed voices leak
"I am love, with no conditions or reservations "
It feels right, there's sincererity in the words she speaks...
Maybe just once more...
he hopes on a 'wing and a prayer'
Heart can’t be broken again ,
he doesn’t have another to spare
Cautiously, and slowly he takes the battered barrier down
Then gazes into the possibilities,
of where love is said to be found...
Lost within the image, just wishing he could kiss her
Speaking to his heart, it begs-
"come take me lover I am yours"
Then dark trepidation overwhelms him,
as he slumps to the floor...
Can’t begin to love her,
no, no his heart wouldn’t dare
Apprehensive of love’s true intention,
as if he doesn’t care
He’s erected himself a barrier yet,
it’s filled with many holes
Damaged from the times,
when love made weak his hold
So when to life came
his heart’s desires he'd hidden down deep
She threw out her arms invitingly,
expecting he’d make the leap
But he gave pause...
once he heard mind's echoed voices leak
"I am love, with no conditions or reservations "
It feels right, there's sincererity in the words she speaks...
Maybe just once more...
he hopes on a 'wing and a prayer'
Heart can’t be broken again ,
he doesn’t have another to spare
Cautiously, and slowly he takes the battered barrier down
Then gazes into the possibilities,
of where love is said to be found...
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Re: Falling back in Mind...
30th Aug 2013 2:43pm
A beautiful piece Poe flexing those literary muscles again, I love it!
Red
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30th Aug 2013 3:03pm
Your loyalty to my ink humbles me to no end my sweet one,truly always grateful n humbled for that! :)
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30th Aug 2013 3:39pm
Ah, Poe ...
Maybe just once more...
he hopes on a 'wing and a prayer'
Heart can’t be broken again ,
he doesn’t have another to spare
Cautiously, and slowly he takes the battered barrier down
Then gazes into the possibilities,
of where love is said to be found...
How sweet and promising. I love this poem, beautiful write!
Chi
Maybe just once more...
he hopes on a 'wing and a prayer'
Heart can’t be broken again ,
he doesn’t have another to spare
Cautiously, and slowly he takes the battered barrier down
Then gazes into the possibilities,
of where love is said to be found...
How sweet and promising. I love this poem, beautiful write!
Chi
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30th Aug 2013 5:38pm
Thank you, truly grateful for your thoughts n support always my dear sweetness... Happy you liked it :)
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Anonymous
30th Aug 2013 5:10pm
Beautifully written - sometimes all you can do is open your eyes and jump.
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30th Aug 2013 5:40pm
Jumping with OPEN eyes!!?? What are u thinking I am!?
Spider-Man? lol thank u my sexy hot kitty! :) appreciate u so much :)
Spider-Man? lol thank u my sexy hot kitty! :) appreciate u so much :)
Re: Falling back in Mind...
30th Aug 2013 6:06pm
Well written, creatively without a doubt. Keep doing tour thing my brother. Much respect!
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30th Aug 2013 8:43pm
Thank you bro. Happy you liked this spill n as always I truly appreciate it too :)
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Anonymous
30th Aug 2013 8:15pm
the vibe of this just rang so true...you're a real genuine dude,my brotha...always well spoken
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re: Re: Falling back in Mind...
30th Aug 2013 8:50pm
Well yea, true to a fault in the sense that sometimes it might be smarter to avoid putting oneself out there so much lol
Appreciate u bro.thanks a ton
Appreciate u bro.thanks a ton
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Anonymous
1st Sep 2013 10:52pm
..at the end of the day at least they know where you stand....
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2nd Sep 2013 3:58pm
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30th Aug 2013 10:30pm
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31st Aug 2013 00:02am
Thank you my precious friend... Truly appreciate ur unwavering support always :)
Re: Falling back in Mind...
This is so rich! First of all I appreciate this because on a personal level even if I start out writing in the third person, I by force of habit revert to first or second later one. (have to go back and edit)
I think it is true what they say, "everybody plays the fool sometime". Caution is seen as a better option the next; and often we feel isolated, like "how could I have been so stupid?"
It also is intriguing because of the reference(?) to an element in the Bible, "I am love, with no conditions or reservations "
A write for the ages.
I think it is true what they say, "everybody plays the fool sometime". Caution is seen as a better option the next; and often we feel isolated, like "how could I have been so stupid?"
It also is intriguing because of the reference(?) to an element in the Bible, "I am love, with no conditions or reservations "
A write for the ages.
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1st Sep 2013 5:07pm
Why thank you my ever so effusive friend!
Truly humbling your praise is n I'm deeply grateful!!
peace n love to you n yours :)
Truly humbling your praise is n I'm deeply grateful!!
peace n love to you n yours :)
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3rd Sep 2013 3:07pm
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10th Sep 2013 12:41pm
I'm so sorry my sweet lady, didnt catch this comment sooner!
I apologize :(... But I thank you for reading n leaving ur kind remarks :)
I apologize :(... But I thank you for reading n leaving ur kind remarks :)