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The Other Side of Me....
Your kiss entangels me in a web of seduction
Your touch brings out animalistic reactions
Gentle bites upon my neck intensifies sexual impatience
The strength of your embrace drowns the clarity of my mind and my body screams for you....
I long to feel you deep inside of me,
feeling the tug of war of ecstasy,
feeling your pleasure press against my inward self,
for you consume my person and engrave your name upon my heart...
You are the other side of me!
By: R Fuller 12/23/2010
Your touch brings out animalistic reactions
Gentle bites upon my neck intensifies sexual impatience
The strength of your embrace drowns the clarity of my mind and my body screams for you....
I long to feel you deep inside of me,
feeling the tug of war of ecstasy,
feeling your pleasure press against my inward self,
for you consume my person and engrave your name upon my heart...
You are the other side of me!
By: R Fuller 12/23/2010
Published 23rd Dec 2010
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23rd Dec 2010 9:06pm
very sweet poem, any man out there would love to hear a woman talk of him in such a way, and intimating all kinds of things, well, in the erotic sense anyway, perhaps a true reflection of each other.
But why not set it up in verse, I think the poem would have a greater impact on the reader line by line instead of in paragraph form--also, the word soul is so over used, would suggest showing what soul is and means to you.
Loved reading it, Robin.
But why not set it up in verse, I think the poem would have a greater impact on the reader line by line instead of in paragraph form--also, the word soul is so over used, would suggest showing what soul is and means to you.
Loved reading it, Robin.
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