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My Mind Has Gone.
The lies that burn in my brain
Like the memories that make me insane
Like butterflies trying to dance through the rain
But all that gets through is pain.
Can someone help me get through this endless state of agony and depression ,
This endless pain
Living the life of pain killers , Stress relievers , And anti-Depressants
I take my medicine , Then my mind fades
Just like my doctor wants me to be.
I don’t know what I’m seeing
I don’t know that I’m breathing
I don’t know if this is life or if I’m dreaming
Are you here , Is this really what I’m seeing?
Or is this just an hallucination ,?
A fixation of my imagination
I’m screaming , Inside , I’m bleeding.
Like the memories that make me insane
Like butterflies trying to dance through the rain
But all that gets through is pain.
Can someone help me get through this endless state of agony and depression ,
This endless pain
Living the life of pain killers , Stress relievers , And anti-Depressants
I take my medicine , Then my mind fades
Just like my doctor wants me to be.
I don’t know what I’m seeing
I don’t know that I’m breathing
I don’t know if this is life or if I’m dreaming
Are you here , Is this really what I’m seeing?
Or is this just an hallucination ,?
A fixation of my imagination
I’m screaming , Inside , I’m bleeding.
Published 23rd Aug 2013
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23rd Aug 2013 2:38pm
23rd Aug 2013 2:38pm
I feel the sadness of this piece.
"I don’t know what I’m seeing
I don’t know that I’m breathing
I don’t know if this is life or if I’m dreaming
Are you here , Is this really what I’m seeing?"
So many feel this acutely. Thanks for sharing your work.
"I don’t know what I’m seeing
I don’t know that I’m breathing
I don’t know if this is life or if I’m dreaming
Are you here , Is this really what I’m seeing?"
So many feel this acutely. Thanks for sharing your work.
23rd Aug 2013 6:07pm
This is a very real place that
you are talking about.
It is in the heart and minds
of man and becomes walls and
chains that bind him.
I was there for 15 years and
made it out through the Power
of God. My personal experience.
This was a very in-depth and
thought-provoking write.
Thomas
you are talking about.
It is in the heart and minds
of man and becomes walls and
chains that bind him.
I was there for 15 years and
made it out through the Power
of God. My personal experience.
This was a very in-depth and
thought-provoking write.
Thomas
23rd Aug 2013 9:18pm
