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ICE CREAM RIDE !!!
Written for the competition " My food is #1 "
When you are stressed
Somehow feeling depressed
Chillax yourself with this perfect scheme:
Get up and Order your favorite Ice cream.
Happiness comes in different forms
Eating your favorite has no norms
Too much longing for the flavors so yumm
Whether its mango,vanilla or bubble-gum.
My love for ice creams had emerged early
Neither returned nor left me lonely
I scream for this ultimate happiness aloud
Could eat up a gallon if my stomach allowed.
When you are stressed
Somehow feeling depressed
Chillax yourself with this perfect scheme:
Get up and Order your favorite Ice cream.
Happiness comes in different forms
Eating your favorite has no norms
Too much longing for the flavors so yumm
Whether its mango,vanilla or bubble-gum.
My love for ice creams had emerged early
Neither returned nor left me lonely
I scream for this ultimate happiness aloud
Could eat up a gallon if my stomach allowed.
Published 23rd Aug 2013
| Edited 24th Aug 2013
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23rd Aug 2013 1:12pm
Yummy and delicious write. I will go all day without food just so I can have ice cream instead.
All the best in the comp. :)
All the best in the comp. :)
23rd Aug 2013 1:13pm
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 1:29pm
Well done Brinda....good luck!
Strider
Strider
23rd Aug 2013 4:11pm
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 2:12pm
Yummy...I agree
Good luck in the comp!
Kitty
Good luck in the comp!
Kitty
23rd Aug 2013 4:12pm
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25th Aug 2013 4:46am
Hello Brinda; Very much liked this piece right here, it is not childish, it is fun and light hearted, which is one of the loving aspects of writing and poetry, and a welcome relief sometimes, very well done...
26th Aug 2013 7:09am
25th Aug 2013 4:51am
Not childish at all. Everyone loves ice cream and a great tribute to ice cream. Ice cream is taking a bow now after this scribe :)
26th Aug 2013 7:12am
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25th Aug 2013 7:27pm
Looking at that pic. N reading this piece has me feening for ice cream now! lol... Thanks alot lady! lol
26th Aug 2013 7:17am
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29th Aug 2013 6:29pm
Anonymous
7th Sep 2013 7:53pm
I'm gettin an ice cream just as soon I eat my sandwich. Taking it to the park where I can lick it in private. LOL!!!! Good luck! :)
9th Sep 2013 5:43am
Go for it !!
Well been a while comp got over. Was a runner up but no winner :( :P
Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 5:54am
Beautiful fun read, we all scream for ice cream :)
14th Sep 2013 5:56am
30th Oct 2013 8:29am
Delhi s badly hot…as usual…nd d candy man came…ur stomach permits…why u hesitate to eat…consume till it disappear deep inside nd insight of u…nd carry d particles…nd spread d cool HOT within u…
30th Oct 2013 8:51am
30th Oct 2013 9:09am
24th Dec 2013 7:41pm
With the sunny symbol of the section the poem is in, you have a poem made for a hot sunny day.
27th Dec 2013 12:03pm
27th Dec 2013 11:30am
This is a fantastic piece Miss. I smiled my way through. Bubbles and sunshine to be sure. Thanks heaps for that Ms Brinda.
27th Dec 2013 12:03pm
31st Dec 2013 9:58am
wooohhh ice cream takes away my blues after a long day!!!its a therapy to my mind body and soul!!!
2nd Jan 2014 6:58am
