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Colors~
A man that can't stop kissing me
His deep brown eyes looking long
Lips that shudder on my warm skin
Our bodies were made for this
The way he makes me feel on the inside
We create blooming colors in flashes
The twists and turns of a kaleidoscope
Discovering new and vivid combinations
His deep brown eyes looking long
Lips that shudder on my warm skin
Our bodies were made for this
The way he makes me feel on the inside
We create blooming colors in flashes
The twists and turns of a kaleidoscope
Discovering new and vivid combinations
Published 23rd Aug 2013
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23rd Aug 2013 9:58am
Sounds like love to me or lust no i sounds like love im happy you have someone special in your life
23rd Aug 2013 12:18pm
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 11:09am
that is a sacred palette for sure tl.
strider!
strider!
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23rd Aug 2013 3:48pm
Discovering new and vivid combinations
Beautiful love sweetheart! Sing my name Tommie...
Beautiful love sweetheart! Sing my name Tommie...
23rd Aug 2013 5:16pm
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23rd Aug 2013 5:16pm
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 7:39pm
Don't know why but the first word that comes to mind is "badass," even though that's not the mood of this poem. It's probably because you're a badass poet, you're that good. I too love the metaphor, and how it ties in with the title. I'm jealous of this one, just amazing!
23rd Aug 2013 8:52pm
Thank you so much for your kind words M...I always enjoy it when you comment! ;) Thanks for reading!
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 11:21pm
I always enjoy reading ;)
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25th Aug 2013 6:34pm
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25th Aug 2013 10:28pm
Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 1:36am
Reading your poetry blends so nice while out on my excursions
