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Somber and Sweet
I layed as I watched every one of you walk forward. Leaning in to give your thanks and apologies, the musky combination of colones and perfumes choked me. A funeral is a somber place to smell sweet.
Published 22nd Aug 2013
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- Edited 22nd Aug 2013 10:15pm
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22nd Aug 2013 11:04pm
This is really quite profound. Enjoyed this thought process. Thank you for the read.
23rd Aug 2013 00:00am
The majority of my works are in a peculiar mindset, check out my most recent poem. You may like it.
At the funeral I smelt sweet but had to be carried out I collapsed as a dead person I watched and learnt ,i wanted to kiss all the people who came to the funeral . The kiss of death is so sweet, yet so sacred!!! And Adam and eve where invited by the priest!You are right!Somber and Sweet!
