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Bullshit lines
Rip your heart out and plaster it on paper
let everyone read it
let everyone in
they can know you
relate to your pain
help with that error you did yesterday
they can even try and fix you
fuck they might want to be you
but those words you can change them
you can preach them and scream to the world about all that's wrong
and all the woes is you
But whatever happened to make you feel that way
Stays exactly the same !
no words can fix actions
no words can cover up pain
let everyone read it
let everyone in
they can know you
relate to your pain
help with that error you did yesterday
they can even try and fix you
fuck they might want to be you
but those words you can change them
you can preach them and scream to the world about all that's wrong
and all the woes is you
But whatever happened to make you feel that way
Stays exactly the same !
no words can fix actions
no words can cover up pain
Published 21st Aug 2013
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Anonymous
21st Aug 2013 11:22pm
true gigi....strider
21st Aug 2013 11:28pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Aug 2013 11:27pm
21st Aug 2013 11:26pm
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21st Aug 2013 11:28pm
22nd Aug 2013 00:51am
Good intentions pave the road to personal kind of hell, make sure you don't walk that road. We all mistakes, as shitty as it is, it's true. We just have to make sure we learn something from them. It's nice to see you writing again Gigi, hope the words keep coming. (Happier words) :)
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22nd Aug 2013 2:27pm
th'crowd roars for this kind of
thing,
justifying the rage of a (delusory) despoiled self, but none of us
Knows
anything 'useful' about 'self'....Ego does not allow it....Ego thinks it's stronger
than our pain & yells
loud loud loud about it
to distract
it'self
there'by......
there are no non-bullshit lines among us (udder'd just fo'sake of eXxxxxxxxtending some
metaphor mistaken for
a mistaken Reality)----
hi-ho, d'merry'O !
thing,
justifying the rage of a (delusory) despoiled self, but none of us
Knows
anything 'useful' about 'self'....Ego does not allow it....Ego thinks it's stronger
than our pain & yells
loud loud loud about it
to distract
it'self
there'by......
there are no non-bullshit lines among us (udder'd just fo'sake of eXxxxxxxxtending some
metaphor mistaken for
a mistaken Reality)----
hi-ho, d'merry'O !
22nd Aug 2013 9:48pm
22nd Aug 2013 5:42pm
Lovin' the words, boo.
Words only work when they're aligned with the inside of us.
Words only work when they're aligned with the inside of us.
22nd Aug 2013 9:47pm
23rd Aug 2013 6:30pm
Yes the pain will still be there even after all the pats on the back and words of encouragements. Some times its best just to say go stick those “it’s going to get better or stay strong” comments up there ass!! Some day’s thing just suck and I would like to hear mine sucks too.
23rd Aug 2013 8:48pm
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3rd Sep 2013 10:58pm
Aaaaaawwwww sweetheart this is sad... I agree words can't fix pain, BUT I'd like to believe bleeding them out will help to some degree.
4th Sep 2013 2:56am
