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I do
Till death do us part
the scars on your heart will remain
from when we thought this was destiny
and we made the mistake of sleeping with
someone who was even more insane
the scars on your heart will remain
from when we thought this was destiny
and we made the mistake of sleeping with
someone who was even more insane
Published 19th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
5th Sep 2013 12:12pm
Fantastic - after your poem about "roses in dilapidated sheds" I came back to read more of your work...I've fallen in love! Your work has a bitterness to it and is so full of emotion...I love it. Again, your alliteration works so well. Your words slip from the mouth and leave a rhyme that isn't quite strict and doesn't conform, but has its own unique flow. Awesome. :)
8th Sep 2013 2:05am
