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'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
Dead...
bullets fly free in a spree ,
go flee, the soul
misled...
in all directions...
emotions without control
life, reality's lie...
rather die, because dead's like home
barren no pulse, no signs of joy...
long gone, flown...
the cold steel
against scarred flesh
urges, promises
relief soon...
calmly,
graciously, the trigger is pulled...
now that spray just painted
a broken soul free
and time continues let it be
as we listen
to freedom's whisper
through the crowded forestry of
trees...
bullets fly free in a spree ,
go flee, the soul
misled...
in all directions...
emotions without control
life, reality's lie...
rather die, because dead's like home
barren no pulse, no signs of joy...
long gone, flown...
the cold steel
against scarred flesh
urges, promises
relief soon...
calmly,
graciously, the trigger is pulled...
now that spray just painted
a broken soul free
and time continues let it be
as we listen
to freedom's whisper
through the crowded forestry of
trees...
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Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
18th Aug 2013 1:47pm
Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
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18th Aug 2013 2:30pm
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Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
18th Aug 2013 2:46pm
Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
18th Aug 2013 4:24pm
This is a cool write. Got several meanings from it. Luv your imagination. :)
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re: Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
18th Aug 2013 6:10pm
Thank u, if I have nothing else I guess I should be grateful for
That huh? Happy you enjoyed n appreciate u always
That huh? Happy you enjoyed n appreciate u always
Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
Anonymous
18th Aug 2013 4:44pm
Very beautifully composed
A good read
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Kitty
A good read
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Kitty

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re: Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
18th Aug 2013 6:11pm
Happy you liked this ink my dear friend... Humbled n grateful for your continued support
Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
Anonymous
18th Aug 2013 6:04pm
I like the opening lines, nice set up to the rest of the poem. Well done again my friend :)

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re: Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
18th Aug 2013 6:08pm
Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
18th Aug 2013 7:48pm
Dammit man, these Zolpidem Tartrate got a sista trippin! Had me thinking the tree had a gun and was shooting! o.O Okay, okay....
This was dark, clever and quite beautifully written. Sometimes, I'm afraid of your mind! :)
Pens Up~
This was dark, clever and quite beautifully written. Sometimes, I'm afraid of your mind! :)
Pens Up~
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re: Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
19th Aug 2013 00:45am
Lmao love this comment!! n yea I'm super humbled n honored too... Thanks my dear sweet Rain!
Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
6th Sep 2013 7:04pm
re: Re: 'Bullets, like the trees cant hear thy cry'
7th Sep 2013 1:17am
Well if it is I hope it's addictive to you as well! lol
I'm a pen pimp/pusher lmao jk... But NOT about being grateful
Which I absolutely am :)
I'm a pen pimp/pusher lmao jk... But NOT about being grateful
Which I absolutely am :)