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We Dance~
Open me from behind
let me feel your rhythm
flow across my moist
expansion
I'll be your passage
into the light that
you seek
That beating want
that intrudes in
your mind
Invade my everything
leaving nothing
untouched
Slowly we sink into
one anothers
flesh with
open mouths
stamping our
terms on
slick bodies
I yearn for each
performance
Waiting to be coated
from the inside
while beads of sweat
rest on my outlines
We move in time
like a dance
than take our bows
let me feel your rhythm
flow across my moist
expansion
I'll be your passage
into the light that
you seek
That beating want
that intrudes in
your mind
Invade my everything
leaving nothing
untouched
Slowly we sink into
one anothers
flesh with
open mouths
stamping our
terms on
slick bodies
I yearn for each
performance
Waiting to be coated
from the inside
while beads of sweat
rest on my outlines
We move in time
like a dance
than take our bows
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Re: We Dance~
17th Aug 2013 1:10am
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17th Aug 2013 1:13am
Re: We Dance~
Anonymous
17th Aug 2013 3:28am
it did have a nice flow to it tl
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re: Re: We Dance~
17th Aug 2013 4:49am
Re: We Dance~
Anonymous
17th Aug 2013 3:47am
Take a bow for this one :) Evoked such images of the oneness of the sexual experience. I like this passage:
"Invade my everything
leaving nothing
untouched"
"Invade my everything
leaving nothing
untouched"
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re: Re: We Dance~
17th Aug 2013 4:51am
Much appreciated Lerdgoin...
The thought of such
an invasion sends me
into orgasmic overload!
As always, thank you for reading and your wonderful comment! ;)
The thought of such
an invasion sends me
into orgasmic overload!
As always, thank you for reading and your wonderful comment! ;)
re: re: Re: We Dance~
Anonymous
17th Aug 2013 6:36am
There ya go again! ;) Beautiful, powerful sensuality in that "overload" passage.
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Re: We Dance~
17th Aug 2013 6:00am
re: Re: We Dance~
17th Aug 2013 6:41am
Re: We Dance~
17th Aug 2013 6:48pm
Favourite lines:
Sensuous write. Favourite lines:
I'll be your passage
Into the light that
You seek
We move in time
Like a dance
Then take our bows
Sensuous write. Favourite lines:
I'll be your passage
Into the light that
You seek
We move in time
Like a dance
Then take our bows
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re: Re: We Dance~
19th Aug 2013 12:38pm
Re: We Dance~
19th Aug 2013 12:32pm
"Invade my everything
leaving nothing
untouched"
Great write Tommie, thanks for sharing.
leaving nothing
untouched"
Great write Tommie, thanks for sharing.
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re: Re: We Dance~
19th Aug 2013 12:39pm
Re: We Dance~
23rd Aug 2013 3:27am
I WANNA DANCE PLEASE CAN I CAN I GODDAMN IT WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO GET THE THREE FUCKIN CREDITS TO POST SHIT FUCK
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