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I miss you...

I search for you, but your not there, all I have left are memories of how things were, how you felt in my arms, the scent of your cologne and how it felt to be so close to you that I could feel your heart beating against my chest... I miss the feel of your hands caressing my face, drawing outlines over lips and eyelids...fingertips arousing my breast and teasing my body in the most erotic natured foreplay, I miss your lips so soft gently kissing between my thighs, finding that essence of sex and desire I fantasize about... I long for you, I miss you!!

By: R Fuller 12/17/2010

Written by blueeyes415263

Published 18th Dec 2010

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beaker_of_time (Howard Reid)

19th Dec 2010 11:49pm

I like my poems to take you on a journey. I like how this starts to do that, but falls short somehow. I believe this is the start of something great. It leaves me wanting more. If that was what you were aiming for you did it.