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Wear it Well
Every curve is a smooth ride
a touch like velvet soft petals
under fingertips
control in her sways with
every bend from side to
side making contact
when needed
sultry skin shining in all
the right spots she is comfortable
in her naked flesh
passion leaks from her eyes
sensuality drips from her
hands while she is emitting
wonderful heat
a touch like velvet soft petals
under fingertips
control in her sways with
every bend from side to
side making contact
when needed
sultry skin shining in all
the right spots she is comfortable
in her naked flesh
passion leaks from her eyes
sensuality drips from her
hands while she is emitting
wonderful heat
Published 14th Aug 2013
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14th Aug 2013 2:01pm
14th Aug 2013 2:35pm
Okay...I am going to have to cover this topic too...you are making me do this...
Anonymous
14th Aug 2013 2:54pm
I can feel the first stanza :) I love the confidence in this piece. It is a beautiful thing for one to feel comfortable with their body. And "passion leaks from her eyes" is powerful...Intimacy so intense that it brings tear of joy :)
Anonymous
14th Aug 2013 5:57pm
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Anonymous
14th Aug 2013 10:30pm
Alluring! I love this poem. Also, I've noticed you've really found your style - just a couple short stanzas, but EVERY word and metaphor counts and makes maximum impact. Nothing is wasted. Bravo!
Anonymous
14th Aug 2013 10:49pm
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