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High Risk Hide-and-go-seek (Dad Comp)
The game is a classic with a twist
High risk hide-and-go-seek
Daddy's favorite to play
Only he never hid
And he never lost
The rules are smiple
No count to 100
It's ready or not
Only one round
Winner takes all
I was a very sore loser
High risk hide-and-go-seek
Daddy's favorite to play
Only he never hid
And he never lost
The rules are smiple
No count to 100
It's ready or not
Only one round
Winner takes all
I was a very sore loser
Published 13th Aug 2013
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14th Aug 2013 00:05am
OMG. I totally know what you are saying.So sad, bad dad.
I hope you win the comp and I hope they understand this very deep poem. Deeply intriguing.
I hope you win the comp and I hope they understand this very deep poem. Deeply intriguing.
14th Aug 2013 00:09am
14th Aug 2013 2:33pm
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14th Aug 2013 4:39pm
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5th Sep 2013 00:24am
So short yet so beautifully dark and to the point. I love this deary. <3
6th Sep 2013 2:00am
27th Oct 2013 2:12am
Wow this poem has brilliantly dark undertones. Simply fantastic. -Keep smiling
27th Oct 2013 2:15am
