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-without Love
we're just shadows
in the
dark
in the
dark
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 12th Aug 2013
| Edited 27th Jun 2018
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Re: Without Love
13th Aug 2013 2:29am
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 7:44am
Never has so few words conveyed so much. Powerful little ink Ed.
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Re: Without Love
13th Aug 2013 7:51am
Thanks Mia,but I still remember your "All you wanted" write...Which was awesome.You should repost that one...
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 5:36pm
You are too good for my ego :) I may just do that since I'm not going to reactivate the old profile.
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16th Aug 2013 00:57am
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Re: Without Love
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or existing without really living
this is very very true!
A very insightful ED!
Darker
this is very very true!
A very insightful ED!
Darker
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15th Oct 2013 5:05am
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Anonymous
28th Nov 2013 1:42am
can a soul live without luv
yes.....in a world of darkness
where nothing is felt
sadness numbing feelings
tears of blood are shed
each one dripping
a piece of life from your heart
is this living you ask
not really.....but your not physically dead
your heart and soul are dying
sinking deep within the walls of yourself
in the blackness of you
hell is chained to your inner self
haunting the wish to be dead
yes.....in a world of darkness
where nothing is felt
sadness numbing feelings
tears of blood are shed
each one dripping
a piece of life from your heart
is this living you ask
not really.....but your not physically dead
your heart and soul are dying
sinking deep within the walls of yourself
in the blackness of you
hell is chained to your inner self
haunting the wish to be dead
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Re: Without Love
28th Nov 2013 1:49am
Amazing Flower...Is this a piece of yours?Or was it inspired on the fly?
Thanks for reading...
Thanks for reading...
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3rd Dec 2013 12:34pm
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