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Someday.
Someday, we can finally be free
Someday, we will figure out who we want to be
Someday, we will truly live
Someday, we will learn how to give
Someday, we will win this never ending fight
Someday, we will see the light
Someday, isn't real
It's a dream.
We see, but cannot feel.
Someday, we will figure out who we want to be
Someday, we will truly live
Someday, we will learn how to give
Someday, we will win this never ending fight
Someday, we will see the light
Someday, isn't real
It's a dream.
We see, but cannot feel.
Published 14th Dec 2010
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14th Dec 2010 1:08pm
excellent verse my friend i love rhyming poetry very hard to convey a story in rhyme but you do it well
14th Dec 2010 3:58pm
I really like it. At the beginning there's a lot of hope and suddenly everything fails.It's very realistic...
16th Dec 2010 5:57am
Thank you Stan and fallen_soul, your comments mean heaps >:)
Sincerely, me.
Sincerely, me.
