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"We Will Miss You," (Those Who knew Her will know Whom I speak of).
Losing someone causes such pain
Your insides ache and hurt and
it feels as though something
inside of you has been ripped
away
You are now missing someone that
was such a joy to your everyday
life
It feels like a knife twisting
and turning inside of your guts
We have lost contact with someone
who was such a beautiful soul
Who brought daylight and happiness
to our DUP world
Someone whose scribes were so full
of creativity and fun
But also were written with passion
and some with hurt
One who we had on our updates list
so that everything she posted we
were sure to not miss
Gifted in the fine art of poetry
and a way with words that was simply
outstanding
And every thought that she jotted-down
and sent across the wire was attention
demanding
We will miss your thoughts on life and
stanzas that made us smile and the ones
that heated us up in the private regions
and made us say, "Wow,"
Our hearts and thoughts be with you
Your insides ache and hurt and
it feels as though something
inside of you has been ripped
away
You are now missing someone that
was such a joy to your everyday
life
It feels like a knife twisting
and turning inside of your guts
We have lost contact with someone
who was such a beautiful soul
Who brought daylight and happiness
to our DUP world
Someone whose scribes were so full
of creativity and fun
But also were written with passion
and some with hurt
One who we had on our updates list
so that everything she posted we
were sure to not miss
Gifted in the fine art of poetry
and a way with words that was simply
outstanding
And every thought that she jotted-down
and sent across the wire was attention
demanding
We will miss your thoughts on life and
stanzas that made us smile and the ones
that heated us up in the private regions
and made us say, "Wow,"
Our hearts and thoughts be with you
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Re: "We Will Miss You," (Those Who knew Her will know Whom I
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9th Aug 2013 2:22am
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9th Aug 2013 2:27am
Man you've actually got me now with a lump in my throat and eyes watery with tears.
I know from your scribes that you were really close/as you could be.
It's amazing how you can get close to someone that you have never met physically.
Ahh the power of friendship.
Peace to you C.P... Pan
I know from your scribes that you were really close/as you could be.
It's amazing how you can get close to someone that you have never met physically.
Ahh the power of friendship.
Peace to you C.P... Pan
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9th Aug 2013 2:31am
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 2:25am
she will be missed very much great write
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9th Aug 2013 2:27am
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 2:30am
She might be back pan...cross fingers...
Great tribute!
Great tribute!
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9th Aug 2013 2:34am
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9th Aug 2013 2:50am
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9th Aug 2013 2:53am
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9th Aug 2013 3:08am
I know what you mean.
Sometimes people write or live-out etc, because
that's all that they feel like they're worth.
A lot of women who have been beaten or raped
become what they have been a victim of.
But she is talented and exceptional and although almost impossible to get beyond that kind of p.t.s.d if she can then it would be great.
Keep her in our thoughts and meditations is all we can do.
The thing crazy thing about this site is that a lot of the people that we come to know live in different countries.
Sometimes people write or live-out etc, because
that's all that they feel like they're worth.
A lot of women who have been beaten or raped
become what they have been a victim of.
But she is talented and exceptional and although almost impossible to get beyond that kind of p.t.s.d if she can then it would be great.
Keep her in our thoughts and meditations is all we can do.
The thing crazy thing about this site is that a lot of the people that we come to know live in different countries.
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 3:06am
She was a sweet young girl under all the pain. She wrote with delicacy, even when describing the most awful things. And her non-erotic poems were amongst her very best. I will miss this little girl.
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9th Aug 2013 3:36am
Yes, she was/is Petit.
And truly talented.
I think that she can excel at
anything that she does.
But like Strider said she will
probably be back.
Pan
And truly talented.
I think that she can excel at
anything that she does.
But like Strider said she will
probably be back.
Pan
Re: "We Will Miss You," (Those Who knew Her will know Whom I
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Aug 2013 5:56am
9th Aug 2013 5:52am
The minute that little fool wakes up, I'm making her read this and feel ashamed of herself. I'm incredibly disappointed with her that she'd cave to being cyber-bullied and stick her head in the sand.
A touching tribute to my favorite little girl, no doubt she'll be back when she feels up to it. I know she's been thinking of a new username to post only non-erotic poems.
A touching tribute to my favorite little girl, no doubt she'll be back when she feels up to it. I know she's been thinking of a new username to post only non-erotic poems.
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Aug 2013 12:46pm
9th Aug 2013 12:45pm
Somehow feels like I'm reading my obituary Thomas... ya know...
Just a little reinventing and an attempt to write zero erotica and be more than "the smut lady"
I love you guys!!
Just a little reinventing and an attempt to write zero erotica and be more than "the smut lady"
I love you guys!!
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9th Aug 2013 12:58pm
Oh shit yea, you've been reincarnated.
It does exist. Buddha was right. I got to find him somewhere today and rub his bald-head.
Hey I'm glad to see you back.
Sorry for the eulogy though.
Meant it to be more of a memorial albeit non-funeral in tone.
I'm glad that you're ok though.
Hey though your poetry is excellent though no matter what you wanna write about or who says a fucking thing about it.
It does exist. Buddha was right. I got to find him somewhere today and rub his bald-head.
Hey I'm glad to see you back.
Sorry for the eulogy though.
Meant it to be more of a memorial albeit non-funeral in tone.
I'm glad that you're ok though.
Hey though your poetry is excellent though no matter what you wanna write about or who says a fucking thing about it.
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 1:01pm
Are you kidding lol I'm keeping this for when I kick the bucket one day =)
I've been reincarnated as a virgin hippie and I'm rolling with that.
I've been reincarnated as a virgin hippie and I'm rolling with that.
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Re: "We Will Miss You," (Those Who knew Her will know Whom I
10th Aug 2013 6:34pm
Oh my god i cannot describe the relief when i saw her comment. Im glad she is ok. I really enjoy her poems
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2013 8:47pm
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