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Your Sweetness
Lips touching your outer rim
Inviting me to explore
In
To
Your
domain
With my lustful thoughts.
Slowly sucking your sweetness
As it melts onto my tongue.
Too big for me to have you all at once
So I take my time
With the flavours engulfing my mouth
And my naughty imagination
As you slip down my throat.
A lasting lick of satisfaction
After having you for the one hundredth time
Only for you to just selfishly rest on my hips.
After sweetening my lips
My Sweet Krispy Kreme donut.
Inviting me to explore
In
To
Your
domain
With my lustful thoughts.
Slowly sucking your sweetness
As it melts onto my tongue.
Too big for me to have you all at once
So I take my time
With the flavours engulfing my mouth
And my naughty imagination
As you slip down my throat.
A lasting lick of satisfaction
After having you for the one hundredth time
Only for you to just selfishly rest on my hips.
After sweetening my lips
My Sweet Krispy Kreme donut.
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Re: Your Sweetness
8th Aug 2013 10:17am
I like this very much - you really set the scene and make everything...sweet and sticky.
Mark
Mark
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Re: Your Sweetness
8th Aug 2013 10:59am
Hahaha thank you Mark. Once you have that particular mindset anything can be portrayed. Just need a creative mind.
S:)
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Re: Your Sweetness
8th Aug 2013 1:42pm
Re: Your Sweetness
9th Aug 2013 3:46am
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9th Aug 2013 7:36am
Re: Your Sweetness
10th Aug 2013 3:27pm
This was my first read of the day and a brought a big smile to my face! Nicely done.
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10th Aug 2013 5:13pm
Re: Your Sweetness
11th Aug 2013 3:11pm
Mmmmmmm this was sooooo yummy!!! The only thing better than this would've been DUNKIN DOUGHNUTS!! lol
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Re: Your Sweetness
11th Aug 2013 3:23pm
Haha yes but the way I devoured my Krispy Kreme in the office was a lot of fun and fuelled my imagination :)
Re: Your Sweetness
11th Aug 2013 5:33pm
HA!!!!..well I never!!!..thought i would be jealous of a dough...NUT!!...very witty...you really had me...I guess i should stop hangin around those gutter thoughts of mine's huh?..very nice Sweethaven..
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Re: Your Sweetness
11th Aug 2013 6:27pm
Haha Maybe you should and eat something sweet instead.
Glad you enjoyed.
S:)
Glad you enjoyed.
S:)