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Stars*
Underneath the glowing
field of night sky him and
I bathe in the flooding of
light
A fan of wind blows over
our bodies unfolding us
the air is stirred,
earth seems lost,
heaven is cloudless and
we are diamonds onfire
field of night sky him and
I bathe in the flooding of
light
A fan of wind blows over
our bodies unfolding us
the air is stirred,
earth seems lost,
heaven is cloudless and
we are diamonds onfire
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7th Aug 2013 4:04pm
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7th Aug 2013 4:11pm
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 4:35pm
nice ditty tl....
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7th Aug 2013 4:41pm
Re: Stars*
Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 4:58pm
Tommie,
Nothing like bathing under the stars together! ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
Nothing like bathing under the stars together! ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
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7th Aug 2013 5:14pm
Re: Stars*
7th Aug 2013 6:44pm
Makes me hate life in the city ... virtually no stars at night ...
Great romantic piece Tommie.
Great romantic piece Tommie.
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7th Aug 2013 8:54pm
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7th Aug 2013 6:51pm
this is a truly beautiful poem and it makes me feel complete inside, great writing Tommie
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7th Aug 2013 8:55pm
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16th Aug 2013 1:12am
your welcome Tommie :) & i also like your recent work & the during the storm poem
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Re: Stars*
7th Aug 2013 7:24pm
'diamonds on fire': that's blazing poetry. this is a stirring little scene...
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7th Aug 2013 8:56pm
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 9:36pm
This line:
"we are diamonds on fire"
Is worth the price of admission :D
And I soooooo want the fan of wind...it's f'in 104 degrees here but it feels like, well, HELL! Alright , I have never been there but those I've spoken with that have say it's brutal :P
"we are diamonds on fire"
Is worth the price of admission :D
And I soooooo want the fan of wind...it's f'in 104 degrees here but it feels like, well, HELL! Alright , I have never been there but those I've spoken with that have say it's brutal :P
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7th Aug 2013 9:42pm
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 10:45pm
Excuse me Miss Tommie....an angel like you wouldn't be allowed to get 1,000,000 miles from the gates of hell...they can't risk that any of those little devils will get their hopes up :)
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