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Haiku XVI
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Haiku XVI
Leaves in morning sun
Floating in an autumn pond
Won't survive their fate
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published
6th Aug 2013
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Re: Haiku XVI
jagracia
6th Aug 2013 7:07pm
All things absorbed by nature. A lyrical haiku. Very nice. (plural of leaf is leaves).
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
- Edited 6th Aug 2013 7:11pm
6th Aug 2013 7:09pm
WAH! Thanks a lot! I'll correct that immediately. Looked strange, indeed ... :-). And thank you for your welcome and lovely comment, as always!
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Re: Haiku XVI
Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 9:08pm
A true autumn feel there, dear Chiyo!!!
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re: Re: Haiku XVI
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
- Edited 7th Aug 2013 7:08am
6th Aug 2013 9:18pm
Thank you, Mourganna! Although I aks myself why that came to my mind since I like summers better :-). Tsktsk ...
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Re: Haiku XVI
Poetikmind
(_---_)
7th Aug 2013 11:17am
A nature haiku, just as 'nature' intended! lol
Very well done sweetheart :)
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re: Re: Haiku XVI
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
7th Aug 2013 11:56am
Thanks, my dear! I appreciate your sweet comment! Ashes to ashes, dust to dust. Leaves to the bottoms of ponds :-).
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