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disappointment...
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disappointment...
I want
to read
my book,
why do
you look
like that?
Written by
dartford
(Paul S...)
Published
5th Aug 2013
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Re: disappointment...
jagracia
- Edited 5th Aug 2013 11:18pm
5th Aug 2013 11:17pm
Not clear who's disappointed: the 'I' or the 'You', perhaps both. I can relate, however. Interesting peek into a perhaps too common moment.
You're dead on as usual, D. Like it.
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re: Re: disappointment...
dartford
(Paul S...)
5th Aug 2013 11:30pm
thanks, I flatter myself
that it is she who is
disappointed..!
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re: re: Re: disappointment...
jagracia
- Edited 5th Aug 2013 11:36pm
5th Aug 2013 11:35pm
Don't sell yourself short.
You know what they say:
Once you've had a poet,
you'll never go back!
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re: re: re: Re: disappointment...
dartford
(Paul S...)
5th Aug 2013 11:52pm
I'll tell her...
then duck!
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Re: disappointment...
PsychicApocalypse
(Darker Half)
6th Aug 2013 8:43am
Your poetry is pretty short, but leaves a nice impact with the common words more than a longer one with difficult ones.
^_^
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re: Re: disappointment...
dartford
(Paul S...)
6th Aug 2013 3:01pm
Thanks, that's what I hope for,
so I appreciate your comments
very much...
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