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We Are~
In the cool crisp summer morning
wrapped in rapturous arms
like a feather my fingers
weave temptation across sinful
lips
warmth sneaks inside us
Light dances over us gracefully
like a piece of art in motion
my feminine skin ensnares
him
My curving thighs tempt him
than pull him in closer
feeling him I hold tightly
He makes me melt like an
apparition between flesh
and pulse
Thrusting as one
Searing me
his thoughts of me dripping
Our hot desire bright like
radiant stars
He makes my body squirm
my voice speaks to heaven
calling his name
my body is his, his body mine
wrapped in rapturous arms
like a feather my fingers
weave temptation across sinful
lips
warmth sneaks inside us
Light dances over us gracefully
like a piece of art in motion
my feminine skin ensnares
him
My curving thighs tempt him
than pull him in closer
feeling him I hold tightly
He makes me melt like an
apparition between flesh
and pulse
Thrusting as one
Searing me
his thoughts of me dripping
Our hot desire bright like
radiant stars
He makes my body squirm
my voice speaks to heaven
calling his name
my body is his, his body mine
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5th Aug 2013 12:51pm
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5th Aug 2013 6:36pm
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5th Aug 2013 6:36pm
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5th Aug 2013 1:13pm
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5th Aug 2013 6:54pm
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2013 1:53pm
well written tl....strider
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5th Aug 2013 6:55pm
Re: We Are~
5th Aug 2013 1:55pm
then pull him in closer...
Be careful where you point that thing...I think you could seduce tuna out of a can....
his thoughts of my dripping
this has permission smeared all over it...
Be careful where you point that thing...I think you could seduce tuna out of a can....
his thoughts of my dripping
this has permission smeared all over it...
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re: Re: We Are~
5th Aug 2013 6:56pm
Re: We Are~
Anonymous
5th Aug 2013 3:43pm
Beautiful, sensual write Tommie! This passage was, for me, especially effective:
"Light dances over us gracefully
like a piece of art in motion
my feminine skin ensnares
him
My curving thighs tempt him
than pull him in closer"
"Light dances over us gracefully
like a piece of art in motion
my feminine skin ensnares
him
My curving thighs tempt him
than pull him in closer"
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re: Re: We Are~
5th Aug 2013 6:57pm
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 1:48am
Yes ma'am and you can't go wrong with curvaceous thighs ;)
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Re: We Are~
5th Aug 2013 7:46pm
Wow Tommie you always write beautifully
and every poem is fresh.
"My curving thighs tempt him
than pull him in closer"
Love the curving thighs and soft skin.
Always enjoy holding them firmly but
gently and rubbing/massaging them.
Pan
and every poem is fresh.
"My curving thighs tempt him
than pull him in closer"
Love the curving thighs and soft skin.
Always enjoy holding them firmly but
gently and rubbing/massaging them.
Pan
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re: Re: We Are~
5th Aug 2013 8:10pm
Thank you Pan!
The soft gentle touch
to velvety smooth thighs...
the wanting of hands,
mouth, tongue...to go deeper!
Yes please!!!Glad you liked it, thanks
for the awesome comment! :)
The soft gentle touch
to velvety smooth thighs...
the wanting of hands,
mouth, tongue...to go deeper!
Yes please!!!Glad you liked it, thanks
for the awesome comment! :)
Re: We Are~
5th Aug 2013 9:38pm
The desire builds slowly but surely in this poem to the noisy aching climax in the last verse.
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re: Re: We Are~
5th Aug 2013 9:46pm
Re: We Are~
5th Aug 2013 9:39pm
warmth sneaks inside us
my body, your body
like the big bang
violent explosions
of spewing hot lust
creates sensual, erotic sensations
engulf in a fiery exhaust of hot
steaming sparkling star dust
leads to an epic proportion of climatic results
as (Tommielynn) the "warmth sneaks inside us"
my body, your body
like the big bang
violent explosions
of spewing hot lust
creates sensual, erotic sensations
engulf in a fiery exhaust of hot
steaming sparkling star dust
leads to an epic proportion of climatic results
as (Tommielynn) the "warmth sneaks inside us"
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Re: We Are~
8th Aug 2013 00:40am